Mountain hikes, warm days, and fly fishing. (Serial commas)

In a series of three or more terms with a single conjunction, use a comma after each term except the last.

  • One, two, and three little red jelly beans fell on the floor. (Yum)
  • Coffee, tea, and milk were offered to us at the haunted house.
  • She bought the present, wrapped it, and hid it behind the cat box.

When it comes to the names of business firms, the last comma is usually omitted. Follow the example of the establishment.

  • Smith, Mercurio and Co.

Having fun with this? Information gathered from Elements of Style.

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2 thoughts on “Mountain hikes, warm days, and fly fishing. (Serial commas)

  1. My edition of The Elements of Style (1972) gives the rule that you repeat, however the examples are as follows:
    red, white, and blue
    gold, silver, and copper
    He opened the letter, read it, and made a note of it’s contents.
    These examples make clear that the rule’s “except the last” refers to the last term in the series, i.e. in the examples “blue,” “copper,” and “contents.”
    You have not followed this rule in the examples you provide.

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